Another imitation poem from dlp--tell what you think?

Ok, Don't get mad at me because I am just stating what I see here. It appears that you wrote several lines of large words and big ideas that paint vivid pictures and then strung them all together. But forget to add a subject to your poem. I read the poem three or four times and I can't come up with ANYTHING that could be the point of this poem. Maybe I'm just missing something and if I am I would love for you to tell me what it is, But I don't see that there is any subject here. Sorry :(