Genesis Swartwout
Friday, August 12, 2011
How does my excerpt sound?
It's not bad but it needs a hook. Make the old man look like Bill Clinton and be mentally handicapped and asking you for help finding his pony. You know, something like that to grab the reader's interest.
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