Is my apprenticeships application ok!? (Animal based job)?

I think it is good. I am in the same position as you - 17, eager to find a job in the "animal world'. I love animals and always have. But I think I'm going to continue my life long dream to work as a veterinarian. I have everything planned & set out. I am a senior this year and am so excited to get out of school and get into the real world to pursue my dream! Good luck with yours!